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AQA GCSE · Question 03 · Explorations in Creative Reading and Writing
You now need to think about the whole of the source.
This text is taken from the middle of a novel.
How has the writer structured the text to interest you as a reader?
You could write about:
- what the writer focuses your attention on at the beginning of the source
- how and why the writer changes this focus as the source develops
- any other structural features that interest you.
You now need to think about the whole of the source.
This text is taken from the middle of a novel.
How has the writer structured the text to interest you as a reader?
You could write about:
- what the writer focuses your attention on at the beginning of the source
- how and why the writer changes this focus as the source develops
- any other structural features that interest you.
How to approach this question
1. Think about the text as a journey. Where does it start, where does it go, and where does it end?
2. Divide the text into a beginning, a middle, and an end. What is the main focus of each section?
3. Explain *how* the focus shifts between these sections (e.g., from internal thoughts to external description, from a wide view to a close-up, from description to action/dialogue).
4. Explain *why* the writer has made these structural choices. What effect does it have on the reader's understanding, the tension, or the atmosphere?
Full Answer
This question assesses AO2, focusing on structure. Structure refers to how a text is organised and put together. A good answer will comment on the overall shape of the text, identifying key shifts in focus or perspective and explaining how these shifts contribute to the overall meaning and impact on the reader. You should consider the beginning, the development in the middle, and the ending.
Common mistakes
Students often confuse language analysis with structural analysis. While they are linked, this question wants you to focus on the 'big picture' – the order of events, shifts in time or place, and how the text is put together, rather than individual word choices.
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